The rewrite totally ditches the stiff

Bullet-point vibe and just goes off on its own—way chattier, way less buttoned-up. You get all these random opinions and little asides tossed in, stuff that’s nowhere in the original. The info kinda jumps around too, not sticking to the original order at all. The first one’s all, “Here’s the facts, boom boom boom.” The new one? Feels more like someone’s just rambling to you over coffee about the gig.